[pypy-svn] r51996 - pypy/extradoc/proposal

[jacob at codespeak.net]

Author: jacob
Date: Sat Mar  1 14:05:57 2008
New Revision: 51996

Modified:
   pypy/extradoc/proposal/openjdk-challenge.txt
Log:
Language tweaks.

Modified: pypy/extradoc/proposal/openjdk-challenge.txt
==============================================================================
--- pypy/extradoc/proposal/openjdk-challenge.txt	(original)
+++ pypy/extradoc/proposal/openjdk-challenge.txt	Sat Mar  1 14:05:57 2008
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 are not limited to: dynamic invocation, lightweight bytecode loading,
 tail calls, etc.
 
-Implementation wise, the JIT backends for the plain JVM and for the
+Implementation-wise, the JIT backends for the plain JVM and for the
 MLVM could share most of the code, with the latter making use of the
 special features when needed.
 
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
 Jython people)
 
 To have a working JIT for the JVM is an important step towards making PyPy
-the fastest Python for the JVM, ever.  Moreover, due to the innovative
+the fastest Python for the JVM.  Moreover, due to the innovative
 ideas implemented by PyPy, it is likely that Python could become
 the fastest dynamic language of its class that runs on the top of the JVM.
 
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
 
 Antonio Cuni is one of the core developers of PyPy; he is the main
 author of the CLI backend, and the coauthor of the JVM backend;
-recently, he began working on the experimental CLI backend for the
+recently, he began working on an experimental CLI backend for the
 JIT.
 
 Currently, he is a PhD student at Univeristà degli Studi di Genova,